Good but wierd
Any reason that it's a video file instead of a flash?
Nice! Great episode and I hope you get a good score. Anyway onto my review.
Graphics 3/5 Because the effects could have been better.
Sound 4/5 Because after awhile the same hitting sound got annoying.
Story 5/5 Because I didn't see any problems with it.
Loader 5/5 Because it kept me interested.
Overall 17/20 which comes out to be 8/10.
Good job! Now you can start on Silver's True Destiny Episode 1 remake if you're still up to it :D
I liked it. Some parts are pretty funny. Overall it deserves a 7/10. Only reason is there weren't many shorts. Maybe if you could add a little more this could be a hit. Anyway onto my review.
Graphics 3/5 (I didn't like the points where it was completely zoomed out, harder to see)
Sound 5/5 (I didn't see any problems with it)
Story 0/5 (only because the clips are random)
The scouter says the lol level was over 9000, so good job.
Loader 2/5 because it isn't interactive.
Overall nice job, I can't wait for 4
I found that this episode was quite boring. Although the fighting is ok, I would suggest you try a different DBZ bit style. I'm not liking the highly pixelated zoom. But overall it was pretty good. I also suggest you buff up the effects.
This sucked. It was all tweens, and the background looped over and over again. The effects overall sucked, the sound was too loud, and it gave me a headache. I think it is safe to say that this is indeed another thing giving sprites a bad name. My advice, lay off the edits and make somehting more original instead of copying shadefalcon and supershadow124
this is coming from you? no comment.
Wow the fighting was awesome! The only reason I'm giving a 9 is because I thought that at some parts it was boring, but overall good episode! Also I am sad to see this not getting front page, because it deserves it
cool and OMFG THESE PPL IN NG TODAY!
OMFG WHATS WRONG WITH THESE PEOPLE OF NEWGROUDNS TODAY!!!!!! lol. so what. he puts more effort into his videos for the dvd. thats a good thing. and of course u cant expect everything to be exactly the same. if ur in love with his original stuff, THEN GO WATCH IT. nobody says, u must watch his new stuff. and frankly i think its good he came up with some new jokes. it wouldn't b good if its just hte same crap over and over and over again. jeez. and no he aint losing his funny he didn't have much material to work with or somehting idk just seriously STFU ppl
great! i love it. im thinking of doing a sprite comedy. this can give me some pointers in what sprite comedy fans r interested in.
animation choppy needs work. u need more plot. and u need some practicing on ur spriting and animation. try not to make the sprites feel like paper by flipping them aroun. if u need to have htem rotate customl make them rotating. alsoi noticed some of ur things were compressed tot he point hwere htey have grey around them (mostly ur bgs) in the library right click options set it to png and gif compression. should fix all problems with bitmaps
i got it to work!!!!!
ok well i dont know what flash ur using but none of ur buttons work. i did however find a way to view. i simply used view source ctrl+F and searched SWF. after that i downloaded the swf onto my computer and used right click next right click mplay ect..... anways. i just about loved it. the animation was smooth and i loved the way u made the lines squiggle on purpose. and were those real children talking? overall i say nice work and once u fix those buttons im sure youl get even higher ratings
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